Hey this is kind of a children's story, let me know how you like it.:)
I am a barrel cacti, I am fifty years old and still young. I live in Casa Grande, Arizona where the
weather gets very hot and is often sunny. I always point to the southwest so that I
don’t get burnt. To my right sits a
prickly pear cactus, to my left stands a saguaro cactus. The saguaro stands tall and when the sun sets
he blocks my view of the beautiful sunset. I often complain to him but he just laughs and
says I need to grow taller. Well, I am
ten feet tall, and for a barrel cactus that is an amazing feet; it was clear I wasn’t
going to get any taller.
The saguaro called himself Guapo, which meant
handsome; but the barrel decided to take on a more modest name, Epico. Guapo was sixteen feet tall and had many arms
that reached out in all directions; he teased Epico, since Epico was a plain
stalk. Every evening Guapo would stand
tall and exclaim over the beauty of the sunset, he would never describe it to
Epico; he would only say that it was more beautiful than the last. Epico resented Guapo for this and every once
and a while he would yell at him for his audacity.
Cosa Dulce, which meant sweet
thing, would calm Epico down on these occasions. She was the little prickly pear that dwelt
beneath him; she would never be able to see the sunrise or sunset for she was
too short. A building blocked her way on
the east and on the west both Epico and Guapo blocked her view. Epico was always courteous enough to describe
the sunrise down to the smallest detail. Epico also noticed that she was never
irritated with either him or Guapo for standing in her way; Cosa Dulce always
seemed to be happy. Epico decided he
would try and acquire Cosa Dulce’s optimistic attitude and for years after he
became less infuriated with Guapo.
It had been seven years since Epico
had learned to be content, and he had still never seen a sunset. Guapo was too proud to describe it to him and
still teased him about his lack of limbs; but Epico’s temper never was raised. Now Epico saw that Guapo had become sullen and
the tall proud cactus he remembered was slowly disappearing. One night Epico woke with a start to a loud
thud, he glanced over and saw Guapo slouch down even more than he had been and
heard a loud sigh. He could never tell
but he believed Guapo had lost one of his marvelous limbs. The first frost came upon them and Epico
toughened it out; he knew Cosa Dulce would be able to stand it, but Guapo had
been getting worse and worse.
It was now three months into the
winter season and daylight broke; Epico and Cosa Dulce watched the sun rise,
for the building which had hindered her view had been removed. She loved watching the colors blend together
in the crisp morning sky, and never grew tired of seeing the golden rays of sun
come over the mountains. The sun had
risen and the daily show was over; Epico heard a sigh and turned his attention
to Guapo. The cactus that had once been
tall and proud stood now slouched appearing that he would collapse at any
moment. Already there was a steady wind
coming in and Clouds began to cover the sky; it would be a cold day.
“Tonight,” said Guapo breathing deeply and
heavily, “Tonight you will see a sunset. I am sorry that in my prime I was too prideful
to realize that it was a phenomenon meant to be shared with everyone. I am sorry.” He said and Epico didn’t even know how to
respond. The aging cactus needed no
reply for he had drifted away preparing for the next gust of wind that would
bring him to his knees. It came towards
the evening, and when it did Epico looked away; there was a loud crash then it
was over. Epico looked back and saw the
mighty Cactus lying on the desert floor, then, it happened, a mighty sunset,
far better than any Guapo had seen before. There is no way to explain it; all you who saw
it would understand, and when it was over Cosa Dulce asked for him to describe
it. “When I fall,” said Epico, “You will
understand, for it is something far beyond explanation. I will fall before you Cosa Dulce, and you
will see the beauty and the splendor that is, a sunset.
Aww I love cactuses!!! (is that how you spell it lol?)
ReplyDeletei have no clue
ReplyDeletePride does come before the fall!
ReplyDeleteYes, that is exactly the message in this story.
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